The first time I saw her it was spring.
It had rained all night long
and the grass was wet.
Time seemed to slow
as we shared a glance
and I knew.
She was the meal for me.
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Written for Trifextra Week 100. This started out something completely different in my head, but I like where it went.
Nice job. We take care of 10 kitties so I can definitely relate to the hunt. They are amazing to watch.
Hahahahaha Love where this went! Thanks for the laugh.
Nice twist.
This is great, I especially love the second stanza. Thanks for linking up!
This is a blast. I like how the deception was not done with the words so much as the tone.
A nice change of pace from all of the other cat-centric posts this week. Good for you. Nicely worded.
The last line was unexpected, but fits given the photo that’s posted :)
haha I like the point of view.