Sugar Lips

She, lit by candle’s flicker
swells with longing, his torment
ceaseless, ensnaring her will with
one single taste of frosting

My attempt at the jue ju form, described in Sunday’s Mini-Challenge at With Real Toads as a quatrain or rhymed couplets or unrhymed, which often carried “suggestively erotic themes”; it does not tell a story but attempts to set a mood. I hope I’ve done it justice here!

Also offered up to d’Verse’s Open Link Night because .. why not!?


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