She, lit by candle’s flicker
swells with longing, his torment
ceaseless, ensnaring her will with
one single taste of frosting
My attempt at the jue ju form, described in Sunday’s Mini-Challenge at With Real Toads as a quatrain or rhymed couplets or unrhymed, which often carried “suggestively erotic themes”; it does not tell a story but attempts to set a mood. I hope I’ve done it justice here!
Also offered up to d’Verse’s Open Link Night because .. why not!?