opaline shimmer across
moonlit skin
the thrum of tribal beats
enticing her to movement
catastrophic wonder
draws onlookers to observe
calamity’s grace and power
sinuous steps
her arms arch above
a scorpion’s tail
poised to poison
in Burma this dance is
seduction;
in Spain, passion;
in America
it’s hidden in back rooms
carmine lips smile
tasting of cherries and
stale cigarettes
and wine
she moves (doesn’t she?)
casting a spell – an incantation of motion
derived of soul; eliciting heart
elevating, fabricating, erecting.
opaline skin, tribal movement
catastrophic power
sinuous poison steps
dance is hidden seduction
lips taste of cherry wine
an incantation for erection
A second offering to the prompt over at Reverie Twenty-One, this one using the form he suggested.
first poemlet: mention your birthstone
second poemlet: use a word with three or more syllables
third poemlet: mention your zodiac sign
fourth poemlet: use at least three capital letters (“I” on its own, and the beginnings of lines, do not count)
fifth poemlet: pick a color and use at least two synonyms/varieties/shades of it
sixth poemlet: use as many different kinds of punctuation mark as you can
seventh poemlet: surprise us with something fancy!
there is some nice heat to your verse…it can certainly be a beautiful dance as it is in your words…but also deadly…ha…smiles.
Mesmerizing motion. I loved every word. And I want her hair.
I’m not a big fan of these types of prompts. but I like what you did with this one.
{ami}
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I like “calamity’s grace and power” – and the global viewpoint – what is forbidden in some places is not in others.
Richard
Yours work. I had some trouble holding the same voice through the whole chain.